User contributions for 24.130.14.14

28 March 2008

• 00:1300:13, 28 March 2008 diff hist −113 MS Ambience Wiki is an encyclopedia, not an advertising site. Removes several fluff words.

27 March 2008

• 23:5323:53, 27 March 2008 diff hist +30 Dave Wilson Nursery Citation does not verify this is largest wholesale grower.
• 17:0917:09, 27 March 2008 diff hist +60 The Greens (Denmark) Citations for English Wiki articles need to be in English. This also needs much other info.
• 16:2816:28, 27 March 2008 diff hist +463 Talk:Irving Berlin Single song sheet music
• 16:1416:14, 27 March 2008 diff hist +77 MSC Pamela Could use more information, as well as some citations
• 16:0016:00, 27 March 2008 diff hist +33 Nova Heart no references
• 15:5015:50, 27 March 2008 diff hist +15 Castrillo de Riopisuerga Nothing in article to suggest this town of 87 people is notable.
• 15:4915:49, 27 March 2008 diff hist +2 Dallas Paxton No edit summary
• 15:4915:49, 27 March 2008 diff hist +73 Dallas Paxton Nothing in article to indicate notable, isn't referenced, doesn't have references.
• 15:4415:44, 27 March 2008 diff hist +60 The Rains (EP) Needs references, is orphaned
• 15:3615:36, 27 March 2008 diff hist +64 Porto-Vecchio Not just marketing and self-advertising, but badly written advertising.
• 15:2915:29, 27 March 2008 diff hist +35 Ralph Johnson (architect) Needs independent sources
• 15:2615:26, 27 March 2008 diff hist +232 Music of Serbia and Montenegro Many questionable statements needing support.
• 15:2115:21, 27 March 2008 diff hist +32 Falling Creek Ironworks Could benefit from several additional references
• 15:1715:17, 27 March 2008 diff hist −1 Galore places most common reference at top
• 15:1015:10, 27 March 2008 diff hist −118 Northeast Kings Education Centre Removes unprovable statement.
• 15:0915:09, 27 March 2008 diff hist +42 Du Cane Court Clarifies what pilots would have looked for.
• 14:5914:59, 27 March 2008 diff hist −32 Cloghy Reverts vandalism by 89.241.165.3
• 14:5314:53, 27 March 2008 diff hist +35 Harold Marcuse Needs other sources besides those tied to himself.
• 14:5114:51, 27 March 2008 diff hist +35 Ishfaq Ahmad Khan Needs sources besides his own Web site
• 14:3914:39, 27 March 2008 diff hist +44 Aeroscope clarifies film advance
• 14:2614:26, 27 March 2008 diff hist +35 Joe Piscopo Needs info from other places besides his fan site
• 14:1814:18, 27 March 2008 diff hist +35 CheatCodes.com Also, could use other citations, as well as info besides, for example, "drole" in-house company annecdotes.
• 14:1514:15, 27 March 2008 diff hist +141 CheatCodes.com Reads like advertising, and makes unsubstantiated claims.
• 14:0314:03, 27 March 2008 diff hist +526 Talk:Chopard Examples of language appropriate to advertising but not to an encyclopedia
• 13:5113:51, 27 March 2008 diff hist +75 Chopard Examples of needed citations.
• 13:4713:47, 27 March 2008 diff hist +53 Chopard This reads like an extended company advertisement, and needs significant, independent sources.
• 12:5812:58, 27 March 2008 diff hist +2,225 User talk:Daytona2 Banners, Notability, and Discussion
• 10:5610:56, 27 March 2008 diff hist +50 Tomoe Ohmi This article needs English references, and not ones from a fan site.
• 10:3310:33, 27 March 2008 diff hist +64 The News (EP) Wiki is not an advertising site, there's nothing notable here.
• 10:2910:29, 27 March 2008 diff hist +33 Saqsin There are a number of statements in this article which need in-text footnotes, English readers must have English citations to verify.
• 10:2510:25, 27 March 2008 diff hist +33 Merga Bien There are several places where this article needs in-text, English footnotes. A typical English reader must be able to evaluate the validity of the sources for themselves, please.
• 10:2010:20, 27 March 2008 diff hist −69 Pogosta disease Just because it's rare, doesn't mean that it follows there's no agent to treat it!
• 10:1610:16, 27 March 2008 diff hist +50 Amanda Hale Not particularly notable, from what this says.
• 10:0810:08, 27 March 2008 diff hist +535 User talk:Dex1337 Disambiguating the unnecessary
• 10:0210:02, 27 March 2008 diff hist +15 Allann Petitjean May be notable, but article doesn't say why
• 10:0110:01, 27 March 2008 diff hist +15 Johnny Dunn May be notable, but article doesn't say why.
• 09:5809:58, 27 March 2008 diff hist +15 Wisdom Fofo Agbo Sounds like he might be notable, but article does not say why.
• 09:5709:57, 27 March 2008 diff hist +44 Aqua Park, Oklahoma Interesting, as such articles go, but could use some sources, and a little Wiki "beautification".
• 09:5509:55, 27 March 2008 diff hist +206 Talk:Deemed university explanation of autonomy
• 09:5109:51, 27 March 2008 diff hist +25 Sci-Fi-London If it's true, it's liable not to be true in future, also. So...why say it?
• 09:4809:48, 27 March 2008 diff hist +27 Tiefa Lol. What about the other 98% of the people??
• 09:4609:46, 27 March 2008 diff hist +47 Standing Committee on Language Education and Research request for more info
• 09:4209:42, 27 March 2008 diff hist +429 N Talk:Jankó keyboard probs with learning two keyboards
• 09:3909:39, 27 March 2008 diff hist +33 Warwick Hospital Citations, and at least a little more information would be nice.
• 09:3709:37, 27 March 2008 diff hist +33 Dušan Jurkovič Some sources would be nice.
• 08:2408:24, 27 March 2008 diff hist 0 Swap meet (disambiguation) reorder with most common usage first
• 08:0708:07, 27 March 2008 diff hist −1 Talk:Rock Springs Run State Reserve No edit summary
• 08:0708:07, 27 March 2008 diff hist +201 Talk:Rock Springs Run State Reserve Better pictures?
• 08:0208:02, 27 March 2008 diff hist +76 Good Day No Rain Nothing notable stated in article