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26 February 2011

• 05:5505:55, 26 February 2011 diff hist +500 Talk:Stealth game →Section break

11 February 2011

• 10:0710:07, 11 February 2011 diff hist +18 Lake Worth Beach, Florida →Notable residents
• 05:2305:23, 11 February 2011 diff hist +23 Huygens (spacecraft) →A critical design flaw resolved
• 05:1005:10, 11 February 2011 diff hist +40 Space exploration I think this perhaps the word "unsuccessful" needs to be elaborated upon, unless I'm missing something... Vanguard was and is still in orbit

10 February 2011

• 09:3409:34, 10 February 2011 diff hist +245 Talk:Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Seas →Plot?
• 05:5405:54, 10 February 2011 diff hist +35 PHP more clarity and a possible disambiguation (however unlikely)
• 05:5205:52, 10 February 2011 diff hist +13 PHP clarifying the "acronym" and neutralising a time-sensitive statement

9 February 2011

• 04:4904:49, 9 February 2011 diff hist +24 Youxia No edit summary
• 04:4804:48, 9 February 2011 diff hist +24 Wuxia No edit summary

7 February 2011

• 09:4709:47, 7 February 2011 diff hist +748 Talk:Kombucha →Neutrality Tag 2/7/11: new section
• 09:4309:43, 7 February 2011 diff hist +28 Kombucha In light of the recent overhaul, this article is plagued by interested parties on both sides and could benefit from an unbiased revamp
• 09:2609:26, 7 February 2011 diff hist −10 Stealth game No edit summary
• 09:2609:26, 7 February 2011 diff hist +312 Talk:Stealth game →The genre's best selling game as of 2011 was Assassin's Creed II with over 8 million copies sold.
• 08:5808:58, 7 February 2011 diff hist +7 Stealth game When all else fails: weasel words
• 08:5508:55, 7 February 2011 diff hist +16 Stealth game Still far from perfect, but less contentious
• 08:5108:51, 7 February 2011 diff hist +542 Talk:Stealth game →Stealth game is a genre/A stealth game is a type of video game
• 08:4608:46, 7 February 2011 diff hist +629 Talk:Stealth game →The genre's best selling game as of 2011 was Assassin's Creed II with over 8 million copies sold.
• 08:3208:32, 7 February 2011 diff hist 0 Stealth game No edit summary
• 08:3208:32, 7 February 2011 diff hist +4 Stealth game This issue with the language has come up before and I personally preferred the new wording. If 'Stealth game' is being used as a title, it should be in single quotations. Is that agreeable?
• 08:2008:20, 7 February 2011 diff hist −15 Stealth game reworded dubious statement
• 08:1808:18, 7 February 2011 diff hist −67 Stealth game I think this'll do just as well as peppering the sentence with tags.
• 08:1208:12, 7 February 2011 diff hist +83 Stealth game needs rewording, but it'll do for now
• 08:0908:09, 7 February 2011 diff hist +182 Stealth game added details
• 07:5907:59, 7 February 2011 diff hist +7 Stealth game further disambig that "he" is not the player. Also, gender neutral.
• 07:5607:56, 7 February 2011 diff hist +1 Stealth game Changing this to APA style to avoid confusion. Regardless of your stylistic preferences, I think clarity trumps form, in this case
• 07:5307:53, 7 February 2011 diff hist +5 Stealth game had to change this back to emphasize that the player is disguising himself and not the noise (although in some rare cases, the noises can be disguised)
• 07:4107:41, 7 February 2011 diff hist −5 Stealth game No edit summary

6 February 2011

• 23:2523:25, 6 February 2011 diff hist +3 Jane Says Clarifying the double "st."
• 23:2423:24, 6 February 2011 diff hist −175 Jane Says Removed selective and apparently irrelevant lyrics

26 January 2011

• 23:0923:09, 26 January 2011 diff hist −88 Gun (video game) Poorly written
• 22:4922:49, 26 January 2011 diff hist +13 Minor (law) This article is a list of current laws, without any context of the history of such laws or the evolution of the concept

24 January 2011

• 02:0202:02, 24 January 2011 diff hist −236 José Chávez y Chávez This is poorly written and speculation. Rather than address the issues individually, I feel that it can be removed with little loss to the article
• 01:5701:57, 24 January 2011 diff hist +84 Young Guns (film) →Box Office

22 January 2011

• 12:1612:16, 22 January 2011 diff hist +460 Talk:Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief →Differences with the Book
• 12:0412:04, 22 January 2011 diff hist +446 Talk:Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief →Differences with the Book

19 January 2011

• 06:3306:33, 19 January 2011 diff hist −27 H. H. Holmes biased wording

18 January 2011

• 10:1410:14, 18 January 2011 diff hist +699 Wikipedia talk:You do need to cite that the sky is blue →Minority Opinion: new section
• 08:5908:59, 18 January 2011 diff hist −71 True Grit (1969 film) This section isn't trivial and it states obvious information that can be obtained from first-party sources. I see no need for additional sources or for this section to be discouraged

17 January 2011

• 10:1210:12, 17 January 2011 diff hist +3 Said the actress to the bishop →"That's What She Said"
• 10:1110:11, 17 January 2011 diff hist +42 Said the actress to the bishop No edit summary
• 09:5009:50, 17 January 2011 diff hist +27 Johnny Ringo reference

12 January 2011

• 10:0510:05, 12 January 2011 diff hist +10 Recycling criticism ←Redirected page to Recycling#Criticism current
• 09:2709:27, 12 January 2011 diff hist +23 Recycling This section begs the question that a change should be made, although it follows an extensive section of critiques. I suggest that this section be re-worded to express the original authors' viewpoints
• 09:1009:10, 12 January 2011 diff hist +10 Criticism of recycling ←Redirected page to Recycling#Criticism current

11 January 2011

• 07:3207:32, 11 January 2011 diff hist −75 Kombucha In line with the previous edit, this position is not detailed within the sources. I'm removing it to allow the citation to be taken as-is, without bias.
• 07:1607:16, 11 January 2011 diff hist −531 El Águila This entire section is contentious without any sources to back it up. If there is an actual controversy, surely it can be cited before adding this. Tag: section blanking
• 07:0407:04, 11 January 2011 diff hist −8 The Warriors the name of the gang in the novel is not the Dominators

10 January 2011

• 05:1005:10, 10 January 2011 diff hist +104 Flag of the United States disambig

9 January 2011

• 02:5702:57, 9 January 2011 diff hist +46 Apocalypse Now Redux No edit summary

29 December 2010

• 12:2912:29, 29 December 2010 diff hist −8 Kombucha Format