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7 July 2024
- 19:3919:39, 7 July 2024 diff hist −82 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Merging my comments, they really should have been made at the same time.
- 19:3419:34, 7 July 2024 diff hist +970 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 19:2219:22, 7 July 2024 diff hist 0 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section
- 19:1919:19, 7 July 2024 diff hist +687 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Reply Tag: Reply
5 July 2024
- 22:5822:58, 5 July 2024 diff hist −16 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section
- 22:5622:56, 5 July 2024 diff hist +935 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Reply Tag: Reply
4 July 2024
- 20:5020:50, 4 July 2024 diff hist +379 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Reply Tag: Reply
3 July 2024
- 23:3423:34, 3 July 2024 diff hist +391 Talk:Climate change →Food and health section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 23:2723:27, 3 July 2024 diff hist −1,035 Greenhouse gas The end of the second paragraph was repeating what's in the third paragraph. Tightened things up by truncating the paragraph and introducing the idea of climate change feedbacks instead.
- 23:1123:11, 3 July 2024 diff hist +4 m Causes of climate change →Carbon dioxide
- 23:0623:06, 3 July 2024 diff hist +1,113 Talk:Climate change →Resolving the issue of rapid rates of change: Reply Tag: Reply
21 June 2024
- 19:5319:53, 21 June 2024 diff hist +895 Talk:Greenhouse gas →Changes made to structure and lead: Reply Tag: Reply
20 June 2024
- 23:0423:04, 20 June 2024 diff hist −95 Causes of climate change Trimming back unnecessary sentence. Best to talk about what's in the chart, not what's absent.
- 20:5820:58, 20 June 2024 diff hist +5 Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise: Further tweaks to the physical drivers caption to help with clarity, drawing from other wiki pages
- 20:5520:55, 20 June 2024 diff hist +22 m Greenhouse gas Further caption tweak
- 20:5420:54, 20 June 2024 diff hist +184 Carbon dioxide in Earth's atmosphere →Effects of current increase
- 20:5120:51, 20 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise
- 20:5020:50, 20 June 2024 diff hist +109 Causes of climate change Clarifying lead image caption
- 20:4720:47, 20 June 2024 diff hist +109 Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise: Clarifying caption of physical drivers chart
- 20:4520:45, 20 June 2024 diff hist +92 Greenhouse gas Clarifyinig chart caption
- 17:3617:36, 20 June 2024 diff hist +676 Talk:Greenhouse gas →Changes made to structure and lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:2917:29, 20 June 2024 diff hist −713 Greenhouse gas Reorganizing last 2 paragraphs of lead, which didn't seem to me to have discrete topics. They just redundantly covered GHG emissions. The third paragraph now covers greenhouse gas emissions, while the last paragraph puts them in context of natural GHGs. Added a bit that introduces paleoclimatology.
- 15:0315:03, 20 June 2024 diff hist +620 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:0115:01, 20 June 2024 diff hist +47 Climate change feedbacks Edit to physical feedbacks as per talk page discussion
18 June 2024
- 23:2223:22, 18 June 2024 diff hist +879 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:4415:44, 18 June 2024 diff hist +2 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read
- 15:3715:37, 18 June 2024 diff hist +13 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read
- 15:3515:35, 18 June 2024 diff hist +1,221 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply Tag: Reply
17 June 2024
- 20:2320:23, 17 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: To untorture the first sentence I split it into two.
- 20:1520:15, 17 June 2024 diff hist +5 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Adding back in the "only" before sometimes, as that's the key point. I don't think the sentence makes sense without it.
- 16:2216:22, 17 June 2024 diff hist −38 Climate change feedbacks Tightening up caption of lead image. Now begins by describing the image, then follows with the feedbacks detail.
- 16:1516:15, 17 June 2024 diff hist −54 Climate change feedbacks Undid revision 1229551938 by EMsmile (talk) Sorry, this change is much more awkward to read. To split a sentence you must have separate subjects for each sentence. Tag: Undo
- 16:1416:14, 17 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: I don't think it's accurate to say the planck response is "how" objects emit more radiation as they warm. Rather, it simply states that they do so and how much they do so. Tweaked wording to reflect that.
15 June 2024
- 19:5319:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist +496 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Adding simplified verison of climate change feedback defintion as per talk page discussion.
- 19:5319:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist +117 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 16:0416:04, 15 June 2024 diff hist −54 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: The general definition of feedbacks was not specific to climate science, so eliminating that qualifier and tightening up the wording.
14 June 2024
- 21:4121:41, 14 June 2024 diff hist +716 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 18:1818:18, 14 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Climate change will --> would, as this is really not being practically discussed anymore
- 18:0818:08, 14 June 2024 diff hist +2,035 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:4817:48, 14 June 2024 diff hist −169 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Consolidating the two definitions of feedbacks that were offered.
- 17:3417:34, 14 June 2024 diff hist +644 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Attempting to synthesize the talk page discussion on whether the Planck response is a feedback into the definition section. Tag: Reverted
- 16:5816:58, 14 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks typo fix
13 June 2024
- 22:3622:36, 13 June 2024 diff hist +169 Climate change feedbacks Reworked the first paragraph. The definitional sentence now speaks in terms of GGE instead of forcings to avoid jargon, plus it now avoids redundancy with the second sentence. The second sentence is unchanged. The third sentence is new and covers what feedbacks influence. The last sentence now defines forcings and climate sensitivity.
- 20:3920:39, 13 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Climate change →Greenhouse gases
- 20:3820:38, 13 June 2024 diff hist +24 m Climate change →Greenhouse gases: Fixing wiki link
11 June 2024
- 19:0319:03, 11 June 2024 diff hist +229 Ruth Bader Ginsburg Reverting edit to last paragraph of lead. Her decision to retire is her most important legacy, and should be put into context rather than being swept under the carpet.
- 18:5218:52, 11 June 2024 diff hist −186 Climate change →Climate change feedbacks: Condensing feedbacks section from 4 paragraphs to 3 paragraphs, cutting about 20 words, and reorganizing the content. Content is now organized into overview, radiative feedbacks, and then carbon feedbacks. No real changes of substance, but I think it reads better and of course shorter is better.
10 June 2024
- 21:1321:13, 10 June 2024 diff hist +21 Climate change →Climate change feedbacks: Correcting a sentence on feedbacks. Feedbacks are not necessarily positive at present, it depends on what you take into account. What is clear is that feedbacks are trending positive, so the sentence is now settled on that point. Also bumping the sentence forward, as it is more important than the issue of uncertainty.
- 19:0519:05, 10 June 2024 diff hist −31 Climate change feedbacks wording tweak, as some co2 feedbacks are not temperature driven
- 19:0219:02, 10 June 2024 diff hist −434 Climate change feedbacks Last 3 paragraphs of lead are now planck response, physical / biological feedbacks, then modeling. I called out planck response to better reflect femke's viewpoint that Planck response is special (it's much larger and happens without atmosphere). This also lets us group content on net feedbacks, including the runaway greenhouse effect sentence. I also condensed some content on uncertainty.
