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5 November 2019

  • 22:0022:00, 5 November 2019 diff hist −312 Empis borealis Such an interesting article! Great information on mating behavior and male choice behavior. The only changes I made to the article was restructuring sentences for clarity. In the cases where I had to do this I double-checked the source to make sure I was not changing the meaning of the sentences. Other corrections consisted of fixing grammar, spelling, and other small typos. Tag: Visual edit
  • 21:3921:39, 5 November 2019 diff hist −93 Pseudacteon tricuspis Great article! I especially like the biological control section- it is really clear and provides a lot of information concisely. The corrections I made were mainly for grammar and sentence construction, both of which I edited to make more sense to the reader and to comply better with Wikipedia guidelines. I also moved the sex ratio section to Life History from Mating because I think it fits better with the life cycle information than the mating behavior. Tag: Visual edit
  • 17:3417:34, 5 November 2019 diff hist +120 Sepsis thoracica This is a really well-written article! Almost everything was clearly communicated, and I made some changes to the sentences that were slightly confusing just to help with clarity. Additionally, I changed the location of citations to after the period at the end of the sentence (originally they were before the period) to better comply with Wikipedia standards. I also added some more links to other Wikipedia articles where I thought it would be helpful. Tag: Visual edit

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17 October 2019

  • 19:1519:15, 17 October 2019 diff hist −88 Common green bottle fly This article is off to a really good start, but needed to add some sources to the already included information. I added attached the relevant references where necessary. I also made a few changes to writing style and took out some phrases to make the article more Wikipedia compliant. Tag: Visual edit
  • 16:1816:18, 17 October 2019 diff hist −82 Derocephalus angusticollis Overall, the article was really good. Sources were strong and citations were in order. Most of the corrections were editing writing style to better fit with the Wikipedia writing style. These edits included taking out extra words such as “Researchers observed” and “In the same vein”. These edits help make the article more clear, concise, and professional sounding. Tag: Visual edit

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