Peer Review Comments You really did engage the reader from the start! I liked the way you used old and new sources and a combination of different types of sources. I suggest adding a picture and expanding the impact section. The impact sections gives significance to the article. Also adding some blue links to your article and to other articles to bring people over to read your article. Finally, be careful not to say the same thing twice. Great Job! EliGamez (talk) 04:55, 31 October 2019 (UTC)