Talk:Eryx jaculus

Latest comment: 1 month ago by 73.70.16.228 in topic Writing Style

Writing Style

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The information on this page seems broadly accurate and cited (note that I am far from an expert on this topic, so I could be wrong), but the writing style seems lacking, especially when compared to Wikipedia's usual standards. If someone who is good at writing in Wikipedia's usual style could give this a rewrite I think it wouldn't be too hard 170.63.193.135 (talk) 16:12, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Agreed, especially the end of the "History" section. The statement about Ukraine and Cold War is very confusing, and lacking citations. 73.70.16.228 (talk) 19:18, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
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