Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 July 2019 and 23 August 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pkhouder, Kmhudson22.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:41, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Foundations II Group 3A Goals

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This article was assigned on the second to last day and has therefore does not have as many edits as the other group articles. With that being said, grammar and syntax have been edited and some hyperlinks have been added. --Inshaqari (talk) 17:01, 6 August 2019 (UTC) To update and expand on gender dysphoria to include some common trends and classification updatesKmhudson22 (talk) 21:44, 5 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

D: There is no evidence of plagiarism. --Inshaqari (talk) 17:01, 6 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

UCSF Foundations II Course Group 3c Peer Review:

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1) Do the group's edits improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review "Guiding framework"? The group had to change articles, therefore has not had the time to make the planned edits yet.

The addition to gender dysmorphia in children, common trends, and classification of gender dysmorphia has improved the article as a whole.

2) Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? Looking forward to reading the improvements to gender dysphoria common trends and classification updates especially after all of the great information presented from UCSF's website regarding LGBTQIA health care today and the associated resources. Ellenberkley (talk) 01:38, 6 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

Person A: Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? The draft submission reflects a neutral point of view. The article seems to present different theories backed with evidence rather than try to persuade the viewer in a certain way. The "Social Models" section could be a great area of development and expansion especially if you guys explore more recent studies on parenting style and how technology influences gender typing. The "Media" section could almost cover a whole history of media trends on gender typing. Ellenberkley (talk) 22:43, 5 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

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Person C: The edits are consistent with Wikipedia's manual of style at the moment. Changes are currently pending, but would like to see more information regarding social models (i.e. extended family?). Would also like to see, under Gender Identity, the expected stages in which the child is to experience gender identity. Jhpham (talk)

Person D: The edits done by the group were written in layman's term and does not display any evidence of plagiarism or copyright issue.

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