Talk:Marjorie (song)

Latest comment: 1 hour ago by Medxvo in topic GA Review

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Nominator: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 10:52, 22 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Ref 1 doesn't specifically support the preceding sentence as ref 2 does.
    • Removed it, please tell me if I should replace it with another source
  • "...the pop maximalist sound..." - "the maximalist pop sound"?
    • Done
  • "After filming, the three celebrated by drinking and unexpectedly continued writing..." - is the drinking part relevant?
    • Replaced with "celeberated Folklore's success and and unexpectedly ..."
  • "...was composed from..." - "was composed using"?
    • Done
  • I have seen GAs using "synthesizers" instead of "synths".
    • Done
  • "...and one of Swift's better songs" - "and one of Swift's best songs".
    • Done
  • "nine out of 274" - change "nine" to "9" for consistency and per MOS:NUMNOTES.
    • Done. I completely forgot about MOS:NUMNOTES

This article is almost perfect for GA! I didn't even had to separate in sections as I usually do.. All good in the verifiable (and no copyright violations according to Earwig's Copyvio), broad, neutral, stable, and illustrated criteria. I will put this   On hold until some minor issues are addressed! CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hey, CatchMe! I believe I've addressed all of your comments, let me know if anything needs further adjustments. Thanks so much for the review, I greatly appreciate it :)) Medxvo (talk) 07:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
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