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Short description: 2020 song by Taylor Swift
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A fact from Marjorie (song) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 January 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that Taylor Swift's 2020 song "Marjorie" has been described as "a heart-rending tribute" to her grandmother, opera singer Marjorie Finlay, who inspired Swift's musical career?
Ref 1 doesn't specifically support the preceding sentence as ref 2 does.
Removed it, please tell me if I should replace it with another source
"...the pop maximalist sound..." - "the maximalist pop sound"?
Done
"After filming, the three celebrated by drinking and unexpectedly continued writing..." - is the drinking part relevant?
Replaced with "celeberated Folklore's success and and unexpectedly ..."
"...was composed from..." - "was composed using"?
Done
I have seen GAs using "synthesizers" instead of "synths".
Done
"...and one of Swift's better songs" - "and one of Swift's best songs".
Done
"nine out of 274" - change "nine" to "9" for consistency and per MOS:NUMNOTES.
Done. I completely forgot about MOS:NUMNOTES
This article is almost perfect for GA! I didn't even had to separate in sections as I usually do.. All good in the verifiable (and no copyright violations according to Earwig's Copyvio), broad, neutral, stable, and illustrated criteria. I will put this On hold until some minor issues are addressed! CatchMe (talk · contribs) 06:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hey, CatchMe! I believe I've addressed all of your comments, let me know if anything needs further adjustments. Thanks so much for the review, I greatly appreciate it :)) Medxvo (talk) 07:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply