Talk:Police brutality in the United States

Latest comment: 3 months ago by RFAvaria in topic Follow Up regarding Reversion/Redaction

Wiki Education assignment: INFO 200 Selected Topics in Information Literacy - Wikipedia

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 January 2022 and 13 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): NCawit (article contribs).

Did you know nomination

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The result was: rejected by 97198 (talk09:46, 23 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

Created by NCawit (talk). Self-nominated at 23:14, 18 March 2022 (UTC).Reply

  Ineligible. Has not been expanded recently nor promoted to GA, and was created back in 2010. Daniel Case (talk) 02:41, 20 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Policy Analysis

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 March 2022 and 30 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Katielizsp24 (article contribs).

Wiki Education assignment: African American Studies

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2023 and 4 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hundredjshpt (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Tjuadiv2023, Dogsarefun123, Dvc02.

— Assignment last updated by Studenteditor03 (talk) 14:39, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

WP:SYNTH issues

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The article contains a lot of detail that is only indirectly related to the article's topic, i.e. police brutality (or which is connected to it only in mind of the Wikipedia editor who added it, without the cited source making that connection). Two examples of many, both from the "History" section:

  • [The AIM] grew while 75 percent of Native Americans had moved to urban areas, becoming Urban Indians as a result of federal Indian Termination Act and other policies. A.I.M. was later accepted by traditional Elders living at Native American reservations.
  • police typically cast a blind eye toward gambling and prostitution (police corruption is not the same thing as police brutality)

The "Effects" section is also in need of a major cleanup in this regard (having been tagged for NOR issues since December 2017 already).

As a rule of thumb, if the cited source doesn't even mention police brutality or a synonym, we're likely dealing with improper synthesis that violates the "no original research" policy. It also seems that some past contributors to this article have, incorrectly, regarded any type of police misconduct as police brutality.

Regards. HaeB (talk) 09:02, 11 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

I found a source that partially supports the first bullet above, though not exactly as it's written. Ironic sensibilities (talk) 22:47, 15 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Race in America, sec 2

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 10 January 2024 and 24 April 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aym413 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Everlark13 (talk) 14:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Global Politics of Policing

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 16 July 2024 and 25 August 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): XoeKing (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Flamingo Cregg (talk) 16:37, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Follow Up regarding Reversion/Redaction

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@Writ Keeper Thank you for your feedback. When my admin returns on Monday I will ask her to review your comments. Interestingly, it was considered poorly written and sourced because she was asked to aggregate information from other published Wiki pages that would apply to the topic. I will ask her to review with our internal team here to show which pages she pulled each cut and paste from and how long those contributions have been published. Thanks RFAvaria (talk) 12:59, 14 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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