Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 20 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Mastroiianni.

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Article Critique

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Hi! I’m Mastroianni and I’m an Italian user working on improving the WikiItalia project. Where does the reference of the French article come from? Since I cannot read it are they a reliable and unbiased source? So far your other links are great and reliable; however, some are in Italian and our viewers may not relate or be able to read in Italian (especially the new updates) so I will be adding some in English as well as it’s Italian equivalent. None of the ones I read were biased so they are good! Do you feel the background on her life is underrepresented? I felt the background could have more information added so I will add one thing to make it grow and inform others of what made her want to study politics Do you feel there is any information out of date? I feel the information on the buses and corruption charges are outdated; instead of taking them out because they were relevant when you wrote them, I will keep them and add the updated version so our readers can be updated.Mastroiianni (talk) 09:50, 11 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Misleading sentence about ranking among mayors

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Raggi being 88th in a list of "administrators" that includes city mayors, around 8000, is an exceptional result that is instead portrayed negatively ("only 88th") . It's like saying that top 100 at the Boston marathon is a poor result. It may be based on expectations, but it is still better than the vast majority of competitors. Raggi is roughly in the top 1% of Italian mayors by approval rate. Unless that ranking is limited to large cities, but from the source I gather that it includes Verbania which is not large at all. So it's either a ranking of all mayors, in which case 88th is excellent, or a ranking of some mayors, in which case 88th is meaningless unless the list is well defined.

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