Template:Did you know nominations/Lillie Rose Ernst

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:45, 29 August 2017 (UTC)

Lillie Rose Ernst

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Lillie Rose Ernst

... that Lillie Rose Ernst, one of the first 12 women to graduate from Washington University in St. Louis, was the leader of The Potters, an artistic group of 10 women in St. Louis during the early 20th century? Source: A Celebration of Women at Washington University in St. Louis ([1])
- ALT1:~~... that Lillie Rose Ernst, the leader of The Potters, an artistic group of 10 women from St. Louis, was the first woman to become a principal in a public high school in the United States?~~ Source: In Her Place: A Guide to St. Louis Women's History by Katharine T. Corbett (1999) ([2])

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alexander S. Wolcott (inventor) for John Johnson (inventor)

Created by Elisa.rolle (talk). Self-nominated at 23:00, 30 July 2017 (UTC).

Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious, the image is licensed and shows her well. - I find both hooks too long. In the first, we could omit the exact numbers (otherwise in words please, up to 12), and the repetition of St. Louis. I like it better than the ALT (which has a useless link to the disambiguation page principal). - Article: please go over it once more and look for

then ... then
punctuation after ref
spelling (climing)
order of ref numbers (should be ascending).

Do we need the gallery? I suggest to use only the first image, larger, in the text. The others seem too small, to indirectly related to her, too long captions split in too many lines. - A bit more lead would be good, and the mentioning of the twelve first graduating in the body also, not only in the lead. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:06, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

ALT2: ~~...that Lillie Rose Ernst, one of the first women to graduate from Washington University in St. Louis, was the leader of The Potters?~~ Elisa.rolle (talk) 18:34, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for changes, and the ALT, but that one says too little ;) - How is this:

ALT3: ~~...that Lillie Rose Ernst, one of the first women to graduate from Washington University in St. Louis, was the leader of The Potters, and artistic group of women?~~ - Article: some refs look a bit stylish - by spaces, and five for one fact are two too many.

I approve but am open to changes. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:53, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Per discussion at WT:DYK, The Potters page has been created, and a double hook has been proposed:
ALT4: ... that Lillie Rose Ernst (pictured), the first woman assistant superintendent of instruction in the St. Louis public school system, was the mentor of The Potters?
Pinging @Gerda Arendt: could you also review The Potters for this nomination? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 11:15, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

Yes, but not right now. I am in the process of improving Wilhelm Killmayer for Recent deaths. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:33, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

Nice new article, excellent gallery! Offline source accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Suggestion: write an infobox, - at present it looks like about a painting, or a magazine ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:55, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt: thank you! I added an infobox. Yoninah (talk) 17:53, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt:, @Yoninah:, BOT said the DYK is not complete, I see that @Gerda Arendt: has given the right tick, what do we have to do now? Elisa.rolle (talk) 09:49, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

Nothing. Ignore bot, or report as wrong. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:53, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

The bot's right; I forgot to add another QPQ for The Potters (artists group). Here it is: Template:Did you know nominations/New York Journal of Books. Yoninah (talk) 12:45, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt:, may you please give again the approval now that 2nd QPQ has been provided? Elisa.rolle (talk) 13:08, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

(ec) Thank you, Yoninah! However, the bot complained about a missing inclusion on the noms page, not a missing qpq, - no bot function yet, afaik. ALT4 is approved. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:11, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

Gerda Arendt, Yoninah, I think there is a technical issue with this DYK that now is not in prep and neither in approved nom. Is there anything an admin can do to unblock this stuck?Elisa.rolle (talk) 17:15, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

duplicate approval, - it will not work with a red icon at the end. (Please reserve these for the rare situation that a nom needs a different reviewer.) I'll put this back to noms and see what happens. The bot should normally copy it to the other side. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:30, 26 August 2017 (UTC)