Template:Did you know nominations/Shadow docket

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 22:13, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Shadow docket

Nixon announcing the invasion of Cambodia
Nixon announcing the invasion of Cambodia
Fighter jet used by U.S. Air Force in Cambodia
Fighter jet used by U.S. Air Force in Cambodia
Aerial view of bomb craters in Cambodia
Aerial view of bomb craters in Cambodia

Moved to mainspace by Sdrqaz (talk) and Jaydavidmartin (talk). Nominated by Sdrqaz (talk) at 15:53, 2 September 2021 (UTC).

  • I've added two images for the Nixon hook, meaning I've had to swap that from ALT1 to the main hook. I'm currently undecided as to which image would be better, so would welcome comments from others. Sdrqaz (talk) 17:35, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Changed to three images, unfortunately. I've swapped out the bomber images (too low-resolution for the Main Page, I think) and added what I think would be quite a good Nixon image, where he points out Cambodian _targets. I would probably prefer the original hook with the Nixon image: it's quite short and snappy. Sdrqaz (talk) 00:32, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
  • information Note: It's a little hard to tell in the page history, but this article was indeed created in mainspace at 22:09, 1 September 2021 (UTC). All of the revisions before that time existed in draft space and were history-merged by me after the content of the draft and the article were merged (see also Talk:Shadow docket#History merge notes). Mz7 (talk) 18:57, 3 September 2021 (UTC)


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: The article is new and long. Even if the article was moved to the mainspace on 26 August, it still qualifies as this is exactly 7 days, so I'm OK with that. The article is reasonably sourced, and the extensive criticism section has been, in my view, properly handled (adequate attribution, diversity of authors, etc.). Earwig was spewing plagiarism alerts, but since the hits concerned quotes only, I have no problems with that. The pictures used are all right.

As for the hooks, using school marks, it's an A for ALT0 (hooky and even somewhat sensationalist, but true - exactly what is needed here), C for ALT1 (I don't find it "hooky"), A for ALT2 (also a good one); F for ALT3-ALT5 (we don't include opinions as DYK hooks unless specifically referring to them as such); D for ALT6 (The opinion of SCOTUS on Texas abortion law, which makes quite a lot of news, does have an explanation of sorts, it's just two-three paragraphs long; moreover, they are usually, not always, unsigned; but if this is fixed, it can be an interesting one). Therefore, as it stands, I have no particular preference to whether it's ALT0 or ALT2, so I leave this to the closer's discretion.

Pictures are all fine. QPQ not needed, as this is the first nomination. Overall, I see no reasons for the article not to pass DYK. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 08:57, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Szmenderowiecki. I've added ALT6a, which should take into account your concerns (good catch!). For what it's worth, ALT4 was written in The Economist's voice, so I think it's fine for stating something in Wikipedia's voice. As for ALT3 and ALT5, I thought it'd be more hooky instead of attributing the quote to obscure academics, but that's fair enough. All that said, I still prefer ALT0 with the photo of Nixon with the map, so (in a way) I'm not too bothered about the other hooks' success. Thanks, Sdrqaz (talk) 11:25, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
As for ALT6a, I still can't accept it, because all decisions have an explanation. EVERY one. The hook simply does not support the "unexplained" notion. Unsigned, sure. Not intended to be used as precedent - absolutely. But not "unexplained". Regards ALT4, this sentence is certainly an opinion sentence, not an assertion of fact. Even though I have high regard for the Economist and peruse it sometimes, they do blend in their opinions in the articles and do not explicitly make a division between opinion pieces and regular reporting. So not, ALT4 is also out of question as presented here.
However, since you insist on ALT0 with Nixon and the Cambodian map, I have no reasons to deny that request. ALT0 with photo of Nixon pointing to Cambodia approved. see belowSzmenderowiecki (talk) 11:41, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
In light of your comments, I've struck ALTs three through five. I'm still not convinced that all shadow docket orders are explained, though, unless you count the reasoning behind a dissent as being part of that (an inferred explanation, if you will). This death penalty order, for example, makes no mention of the majority's reasoning. But thank you for approving ALT0. Sdrqaz (talk) 12:10, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
OK, that means not every such decision is with a comment [1], so well, you proved me wrong (dissents do not normally influence the decision, unless of course that's a full-fetched opinion, when judges can address each other's grievances). I still don't see the support in the source, though. The best shot at this claim is this sentence (from Slate): In contrast, the “shadow docket” consists almost entirely of summary orders, usually only one sentence long but that doesn't exactly mean no explanation whatsoever. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 13:22, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
I've provided ALT6b, but I guess it doesn't really matter since we're not going with it anyway. Sdrqaz (talk) 13:57, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
Just passing by – the Nixon hook isn't really accurate. As our article on the case, Schlesinger v. Holtzman, correctly explains, the order was ignored by the military and promptly reversed by an 8–1 full Court six hours later. (Back in the day, it was common for an individual Justice, in this case Douglas, to issue "shadow-docket" rulings in chambers. Such orders could be overturned by the full Court, as happened in this case.) It's thus not quite right to say that the order "stopped Nixon bombing Cambodia": Nixon kept bombing, and the order was quickly vacated. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 18:03, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
Looks like that hook was too good to be true. I've added ALT0a for review in its stead. Sdrqaz (talk) 18:29, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
Interesting. The source did not provide the info behind that order, so thank you for the correction. ALT0a isn't really gramatically correct. The shadow docket stopped could go, in my opinion, but "shadow docket ordered"... not quite. In that case, I'd rather stick to ALT2. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 18:34, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
The grammar's been changed; see ALT0b. Sdrqaz (talk) 18:44, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
That's better, but it lost that hookiness en route. I'd recommend ALT2, rather than ALT0b, still ALT0b is not that bad. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Szmenderowiecki (talkcontribs) 06:38, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
Hmm. Since it's shorter than ALT2, I would've thought it was hookier. Any suggestions, Extraordinary Writ? Sdrqaz (talk) 03:05, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Sorry, but I'm not having any sudden bursts of inspiration either. I agree that ALT2 is probably the best option: it's hard to say why, but ALT0b just doesn't seem as hooky. Sorry I can't be of more help. (There's always "... that the U.S. Supreme Court can use the shadow docket to issue an extraordinary writ?" [2], but I fear I might have just a bit of a conflict of interest on that one.) Extraordinary Writ (talk) 05:34, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
You're making me wish I chose a cleverer username. Is the grammar in ALT0a really that bad? Inanimate objects can order people to do something, like when a billboard orders you to buy the best toothpaste in town because eight out of ten dentists recommend it or whatever. That'd be hookier than ALT0b. Sdrqaz (talk) 12:29, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
@Sdrqaz and Szmenderowiecki: I think striking ALT0a for being grammatically incorrect is a bit too harsh. I think it's the hookier option, and "shadow docket ordered" sounds fine to me—interesting and mysterious. In any case, I'd much rather promote ALT0a than ALT2. theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 09:53, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
I think there is a fine line between an omission of one word which makes the sentence mysterious and yet easily understandable and something which doesn't make sense because it doesn't. At least "the docket stopped" makes more sense to me than "the docket ordered". But that's my personal perception of that. Let's ask Extraordinary Writ for ALT0a, and if they agree, I will change it to ALT0a. For now, ALT2 sounds a better option for me. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 11:19, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
I'd tend to agree with Szmenderowiecki regarding ALT0a. "The shadow docket ordered..." just strikes me as confusing, since it attributes intent to something inanimate. While I suppose one could argue that it's metonymy, it still just doesn't seem right. Perhaps it's because no one has ever used the phrase before. I'd still recommend going with ALT2, which is a perfectly good hook. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 00:42, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
Argh. Since the winds are blowing away from the Nixon picture hook and towards the Trump one, I've added ALTs 2a and 2b. 2a is effectively a better copyedit of ALT2, with a snappier formulation, and 2b is a better all-round hook, given I doubt people care that much about applications – they want to know about the wins, and there's a larger multiplier there (and maybe some more context). Of course, at risk of beating a dead horse, ALT0b is still available. If one of the ALT2s are to be chosen, I'd prefer ALT2b. Thanks, Sdrqaz (talk) 01:06, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
Well, according to the source cited, {{The Trump administration won shadow docket requests in 28 of 41 cases during his term ...Just eight were filed in 16 years by the administrations of Presidents George W. Bush and Barack Obama, four of which were granted}}, which means that 28 won cases under Trump divided by 4 won cases during Bush and Obama gives us 7x, not 28x (but the per annum rate of winning requests was indeed x28 under Trump, compared to Obama and Bush 43 combined); and, reading deeper, in ALT2, it's the rate that increased, not the absolute number. I corrected both hooks to reflect that. Other than that, any of ALT2 to ALT2b are very good, and if you prefer ALT2b, I will grant it. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 08:38, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
Please don't change hooks like that; introduce alternatives under. The "hookiness" changes drastically when you change 28 to seven. Added ALTs 2c and 2d. I don't think it's necessary to state it's the federal government either; the link to Trump is evidence enough that it's the federal one. Prefer ALT2c. Sdrqaz (talk) 11:29, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
I know that, but the hook must be both hooky and true, which is why ALT0 fell apart upon closer examination.
ALT2c approved.Szmenderowiecki (talk) 17:31, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
@Szmenderowiecki: I'm not seeing how 28/41 is 28 times more than 4/16? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) 05:45, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
@Theleekycauldron: 28÷4=7 and 4÷16=0.25, so 7÷0.25=28. It's the successful requests per year as a raw number, disregarding how many requests there actually are. Sdrqaz (talk) 08:49, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
@Sdrqaz: ah, gotcha. theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 22:13, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
ALT2c to T:DYK/P3 without image
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