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Just wanted to say you're doing a really good job with Julia/Michelle. I don't know how keen I am on the Debut part in retrospect, I would rather uniformity between articles. But overall it's definitely coming together great. Good job! Kung Fu Man (talk) 21:04, 30 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Maybe he can try to nom that article to GAN? T would be cool if he is experienced already. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 23:00, 30 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Tekken characters

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Hey, I'm currently working on Bob. If you can find any other good sources, please show provide them to me. Obviously, I just started, so there's a lot missing. But any suggestions and feedback is welcomed.

I've also been considering bringing back Marshall Law, Ling Xiaoyu and Josie Rizal, the latter of which I've been sitting on for a while. MoonJet (talk) 22:44, 17 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sure I'll let you know when I find the coverage about Bob. However, for now, you can use this source for Josie. Maybe this proves useful.[1] Kazama16 (talk) 08:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
@MoonJet here are two high-quality sources about Bob.[2] [3] More coverage is available in this academic study. Kazama16 (talk) 11:03, 18 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I knew about the first source and that academic study. I just hadn't gotten around to adding them to my draft yet. Plus, I'm not able to access the study, so I may need help with that. Nice job on uncovering the Destructoid source though. MoonJet (talk) 04:21, 19 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I have the article for Bob done now. What do you think? MoonJet (talk) 16:26, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Personally, I think it needs some improvements. Here are my points.
1) The lead: We should maintain neutrality, so replace "Bob is a renowned martial artist who takes a special training regimen that allows him to retain his speed and agility, while increasing his weight." To simply "Bob is a freestyle karate practitioner who takes special training to retain his quickness while increasing his weight." Also add some points from the reception.
2) The first paragraph of reception is filled with listicles and doesn't contain much coverage about the character, so I would suggest removing all of it. However, Den of Geek's listicle is looking pretty solid; extend the information from there. Lastly, don't rely on quotes too much. Try to write the reception in your own wording. I think it will improve the article's quality for sure.
3) Considering the development and appearances sections are really short, merging them and renaming it under the section "Character overview" would be a good decision. Kazama16 (talk) 21:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Nevermind, maybe quotes are fine :) Kazama16 (talk) 07:33, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, the thing is, it's often hard to write reception sections without using a lot of quotes.
The next Tekken character article I want to try and bring back is probably Ling Xiaoyu. I believe I've found some good coverage for her. MoonJet (talk) 15:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Re: Kano

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Hi. I noticed you contacted me about Kano but you then removed it. Everything all right? 💥Casualty • Hop along. • 17:35, 21 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Yeah everything's all right. I thought the discussion would be pointless after I recreated Kano's article. Kazama16 (talk) 18:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ah. Well, thank you for looking me up nonetheless. :) 💥Casualty • Hop along. • 18:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Merry Christmas!

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— 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC) CaptainGalaxy 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Character creation

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Hi there. Nice work reshaping some character articles. The only one I created was Lars in the past but that was around a decade ago. I also tried recreating some SNK character articles recently since there wasn't really much commentary like and tried recreating Ryo Sakazaki, Yuri Sakazaki and Rock Howard. Feel free to revisit it anyone. Still, the newest character from SNK that barely has an article is Ash Crimson and is from 2003. I thought about writing about King from Art of Fighting due to how she was one of the first female characters from gaming but the reveal of her gender comes across as a bit sexist. However, that name makes it impossible. If you find any useful source as potential feel free to add it. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.Tintor2 (talk) 22:52, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

That character seems to have no major commentary. This is the only valuable source I could find about King for now. [4] Kazama16 (talk) 06:13, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I see. Thanks still. Tintor2 (talk) 19:47, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
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