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Course name
Voice Disorders
Institution
McGill University
Instructor
Nicole Li-Jessen
Wikipedia Expert
Ian (Wiki Ed)
Subject
Voice Disorders
Course dates
2017-09-11 00:00:00 UTC – 2017-12-11 23:59:59 UTC
Approximate number of student editors
28


Voice Disorders is a graduate course in School of Communication Sciences and Disorders at McGill University, Canada. The course provides an overview of voice disorders, including causes, assessment, and treatment across the life span. The course also addresses the role of speech-language pathologists in the multidisciplinary handling of patients with voice problems.

The general purpose is to provide fundamental knowledge and skills in assessment and treatment of voice problems. The course is designed to provide professional students in speech-language pathology with basic information about (1) the personal and societal relevance of voice problems; (2) pathologies affecting voice; (3) basic approaches to evaluation of voice problems; (4) basic science foundations of voice therapy; (5) models of behavioral, pharmaceutical, and surgical treatment of voice problems.

Student Assigned Reviewing
Jogruber Puberphonia User:Axe30/sandbox, User:kjbatch/sandbox, User:Lisakuil/sandbox
Chelsea.osei Contact granuloma Puberphonia, Spasmodic dysphonia, Laryngopharyngeal reflux, User:Yoclofro/sandbox, User:Jozacha/sandbox, User:Meggeo/sandbox
Reidh084 Contact granuloma Spasmodic dysphonia, Puberphonia, Laryngectomy, User:Voicedisordersmegan/sandbox, User:Alex BM/sandbox, User:Yoclofro/sandbox
Lisakuil Laryngopharyngeal reflux Spasmodic Dysphonia, Laryngeal papillomatosis, Puberphonia, User:Sujinlim86/sandbox, User:Jozacha/sandbox, User:Jennamackay/sandbox
Jlmdouce Laryngeal papillomatosis User:Khaen23/sandbox, User:JessicaVoiceDisorders/sandbox, User:Jdavid06/sandbox
Axe30 Laryngeal papillomatosis Spasmodic dysphonia, Voice therapy, Contact granuloma, User:Yasbey/sandbox, User:Yoclofro/sandbox, User:StaceyG124/sandbox
Rileyerine Contact granuloma User:Jlmdouce/sandbox, User:Yasbey/sandbox, User:JessicaVoiceDisorders/sandbox
StaceyG124 Contact granuloma User:Jennamackay/sandbox
Mil.sch Voice therapy Spasmodic dysphonia, Laryngeal papillomatosis, Laryngectomy, ABBslp/sandbox, StaceyG124/sandbox, Sujinlim86/sandbox
Voicedisordersmegan Puberphonia User:Lisakuil/sandbox, User:Axe30/sandbox, User:Chelsea.osei/sandbox
ABBslp Laryngectomy Laryngeal papillomatosis, Contact granuloma, Puberphonia
Sujinlim86 Spasmodic dysphonia Voice therapy, Puberphonia, Laryngectomy
Kjbatch Voice therapy User:StaceyG124/sandbox, User:Khaen23/sandbox, User:SarahJay/sandbox
Sara with no h Laryngeal papillomatosis User:SarahJay/sandbox ‎, User:Sujinlim86/sandbox ‎, User:Mil.sch/sandbox
Yoclofro Spasmodic dysphonia User:Axe30/sandbox, User:Sara with no h/sandbox, User:Chelsea.osei/sandbox
Yasbey Voice therapy User:Alex BM/sandbox, User:Jdavid06/sandbox, User:Evans310/sandbox
Alex BM Laryngectomy User:adriana gentile/sandbox, User:Jozacha/sandbox, User:Reidh084/sandbox, Voice therapy, Puberphonia, Contact granuloma
Jozacha Puberphonia User:khaen23/sandbox, User:StaceyG124/sandbox, User:Reidh084/sandbox
SarahJay Puberphonia User:VoiceDisordersKristine/sandbox, User:StaceyG124/sandbox, User:ABBslp/sandbox
VoiceDisordersKristine Laryngopharyngeal reflux User:Adriana gentile/sandbox, Evans310/sandbox, ABBslp/sandbox, Laryngectomy, Voice therapy
Jdavid06 Spasmodic dysphonia Laryngectomy, Puberphonia, Contact granuloma, User:ABBslp/sandbox, User:Voicedisordersmegan/sandbox, User:Rileyerine/sandbox
Jennamackay Laryngeal papillomatosis User:Yoclofro/sandbox, User:Meggeo/sandbox, User:Mil.sch/sandbox
Khaen23 Laryngectomy User:Kjbatch/sandbox, User:Reidh084/sandbox, User:Sujinlim86/sandbox
Kengjalrnvjwngj Spasmodic dysphonia Puberphonia, Contact granuloma, Alex BM/sandbox, Laryngectomy, Sarahjay/sandbox, Chelsea.osei/sandbox
JessicaVoiceDisorders Laryngopharyngeal reflux User:Alex BM/sandbox, User talk:Sara with no h/sandbox, User:Kengjalrnvjwngj/sandbox
Meggeo Laryngopharyngeal reflux Contact granuloma, Voice therapy, Puberphonia, User:Mil.sch/sandbox, User:Jogruber/sandbox, User:Rileyerine/sandbox
Evans310 Laryngectomy User:VoiceDisordersKristine/sandbox, User:Adriana gentile/sandbox, User:Jennamackay/sandbox
Adriana gentile Voice therapy Laryngopharyngeal reflux, Puberphonia, Laryngectomy, User:JessicaVoiceDisorders/sandbox, User:VoiceDisordersKristine/sandbox, User:Sujinlim86/sandbox

Timeline

Week 1

Course meetings
Monday, 11 September 2017
Introduction to the Wikipedia project

Welcome to your Wikipedia project's course timeline. This page will guide you through the Wikipedia project for your course. Be sure to check with your instructor to see if there are other pages you should be following as well.

This page breaks down writing a Wikipedia article into a series of steps, or milestones. These steps include online trainings to help you get started on Wikipedia.

Your course has also been assigned a Wikipedia Content Expert. Check your Talk page for notes from them. You can also reach them through the "Get Help" button on this page.

To get started, please review the following handouts:


Assignment - Practicing the basics
  • Create an account and join this course page, using the enrollment link your instructor sent you.
  •  It's time to dive into Wikipedia. Below, you'll find the first set of online trainings you'll need to take. New modules will appear on this timeline as you get to new milestones. Be sure to check back and complete them! Incomplete trainings will be reflected in your grade. 
  •  When you finish the trainings, practice by introducing yourself to a classmate on that classmate’s Talk page. 
Milestones

This week, everyone should have a Wikipedia account.

Week 2

Course meetings
Monday, 18 September 2017
Intertwine
get started on Wikipedia with your peers! - On your own

Intertwine is a platform where you you will be chatting with student editors enrolled in other Wiki Education courses. This week, the featured activities include:


  • Creating your own User page
  • Learning about user talk page, and writing on others' Talk pages
  • Getting to know more Wikipedia editors and learning from each other's experiences

Sign up for a session here. If you haven’t logged in using your Wikipedia account, you will first be redirected to Wikipedia logging page. After logging in using your Wikipedia credentials, you will be able to sign up for our activity.  

Assignment - Critique an article

 It's time to think critically about Wikipedia articles. You'll evaluate a Wikipedia article on any topics you are interested in, and leave suggestions for improving it on the article's Talk page. 


  • Complete the "Evaluating Articles and Sources" training (linked below).
  • Choose an article, and consider some questions (but don't feel limited to these): 
    • Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference?
    • Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
    • Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
    • Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
    • Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
    • Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?
    • Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
  •  Choose at least 2 questions relevant to the article you're evaluating. Leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback with four tildes — Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:22, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Assignment - Add to an article

You should add a small contribution to the article, or add a citation to a claim that does not have one.


  • Complete the "Sources and Citations" training (linked below).
  • When you make a small claim, clearly state the fact in your own words, and then cite the source where you found the information.
  • The Citation Hunt tool can show you some statements that don't have citations. You can use that to find an article to reference.
    • First, evaluate whether the statement in question is true! An uncited statement could just be lacking a reference or it could be inaccurate or misleading. Reliable sources on the subject will help you choose whether to add it or correct the statement.


Assignment - Copyedit an article

Read through the article again, thinking about ways to improve the language, such as fixing grammatical mistakes. Then, make the appropriate changes. You do not need to contribute new information to the article. 


Week 3

Course meetings
Monday, 25 September 2017
What's a content gap? - On your own

Now that you're thinking about what makes a "good" Wikipedia article, consider some additional questions.

  • Wikipedians often talk about "content gaps." What do you think a content gap is, and what are some possible ways to identify them?
  • What are some reasons a content gap might arise? What are some ways to remedy them?
  • Does it matter who writes Wikipedia?
  • What does it mean to be "unbiased" on Wikipedia? How is that different, or similar, to your own definition of "bias"?


Thinking about sources and plagiarism - On your own
  • Blog posts and press releases are considered poor sources of reliable information. Why?
  • What are some reasons you might not want to use a company's website as the main source of information about that company?
  • What is the difference between a copyright violation and plagiarism?
  • What are some good techniques to avoid close paraphrasing and plagiarism?


Assignment - More training on your own - Medical topics

Review Wikipedia's rules for topics related to medicine, human health, and psychology.


Assignment - Choose your topic / Find your sources

It's time to choose an article and assign it to yourself.


  • Review page 6 of your Editing Wikipedia guidebook.
  •  Find an article from the list of "Available Articles" on the Articles tab on this course page. When you find the one you want to work on, click Select to assign it to yourself. 
  •  In your sandbox, write a few sentences about what you plan to contribute to the selected article. 
    •  Think back to when you did an article critique. What can you add? Post some of your ideas to the article's talk page. 
    • Compile a list of relevant, reliable books, journal articles, or other sources. Post that bibliography to the talk page of the article you'll be working on, and in your sandbox. Make sure to check in on the Talk page to see if anyone has advice on your bibliography. 

Week 4

Course meetings
Monday, 2 October 2017
Assignment - Draft your article

You've picked a topic and found your sources. Now it's time to start writing.


Creating a new article?


  •  Write an outline of that topic in the form of a standard Wikipedia article's "lead section." Write it in your sandbox
  • A "lead" section is not a traditional introduction. It should summarize, very briefly, what the rest of the article will say in detail. The first paragraph should include important, broad facts about the subject. A good example is Ada Lovelace. See Editing Wikipedia page 9 for more ideas.

Improving an existing article?


  •  Identify what's missing from the current form of the article. Think back to the skills you learned while critiquing an article. Make notes for improvement in your sandbox

Expectation

  • A neutral, concise summary of the cited scholarship 
  • Every claim needs supporting resources 
  • Each student is responsible to add or revise 1 section of the article 
  • Each student is expected to contribute between 200-300 words to his/ her own section.
  • A team-effort to write a clear, comprehensible introduction 
  • Add at least 2 figures to the article 
  • Add at least 10 references to the article 

Keep reading your sources, too, as you prepare to write the body of the article.


Resources: Editing Wikipedia pages 7–9


Milestones

Everyone has begun writing their article drafts.

Week 5

Course meetings
Monday, 16 October 2017
Intertwine
evaluate a Wikipedia article with your peers! - On your own

Intertwine is a platform where you you will be chatting with student editors enrolled in other Wiki Education courses. This week, the featured activities include:


  • Learning Wikipedia’s five pillars as evaluation criteria
  • Evaluating an existing Wikipedia article with your peers
  • Getting to know more Wikipedia editors and learning from each other's experiences

Sign up for a session here. If you haven’t logged in using your Wikipedia account, you will first be redirected to Wikipedia logging page. After logging in using your Wikipedia credentials, you will be able to sign up for our activity.  



Intertwine
review your Wikipedia article with your peers! - On your own

Intertwine is a platform where you you will be chatting with student editors enrolled in other Wiki Education courses. This week, the featured activities include:


  • Sharing the Wikipedia article your drafted with your peers.  
  • Getting feedbacks from your peers on how to make your Wikipedia article even better
  • Providing feedbacks to your peers and help them improve their article

Sign up for a session here. If you haven’t logged in using your Wikipedia account, you will first be redirected to Wikipedia logging page. After logging in using your Wikipedia credentials, you will be able to sign up for our activity.

Assignment - Expand your draft - on your own
  • Keep working on transforming your article into a complete first draft. Get draft ready for peer-review. 
  • If you'd like a Content Expert to review your draft, now is the time! Click the "Get Help" button in your sandbox to request notes.

Week 6

Course meetings
Monday, 23 October 2017
Assignment - Peer review and copy edit
  • First, take the "Peer Review" online training.
  • Pick three articles you are interested in.  
  • The articles should be on a different topic from your own.
  • Select the sandbox from a classmate that you will peer review and copyedit. On the Articles tab, find the articles that you want to review, and then assign them to yourself in the Review column. 
  • You can edit each other's sandbox just like any other page. You can assign yourselves sandboxes by using the full name of the sandbox when you assign yourselves a page - so User:Username/sandbox would assign the sandbox of a student whose user name was Username.  
  • Peer review your classmates' drafts. Leave suggestions on the Talk page of the sandbox that your classmate is working on. Other editors may be reviewing your work, so look for their comments! Be sure to acknowledge feedback from other Wikipedians. 
  •  As you review, make spelling, grammar, and other adjustments. Pay attention to the tone of the article. Is it encyclopedic? 

Remember there are a lot of ways to get help on Wikipedia.  One way is to click on the "Get Help" button on the top of the page.  You should get practice using it and also get practice  finding answers to your questions independently.  The Wikipedia Expert is always there to help but you should try on your own before you reach out. 

Milestones

Every student has finished reviewing their assigned articles, making sure that every article has been reviewed.

Week 7

Course meetings
Monday, 30 October 2017
Assignment - Respond to your peer review

You probably have some feedback from other students and possibly other Wikipedians. It's time to work with that feedback to improve your article!


  • Read Editing Wikipedia pages 12 and 14.
  • Return to your draft or article and think about the suggestions. Decide which ones to start implementing. Reach out to your instructor or your Content Expert if you have any questions. 

Week 8

Course meetings
Monday, 6 November 2017
Continue improving your article - On your own

Do additional research and writing to make further improvements to your article, based on suggestions and your own critique.


  •  Read Editing Wikipedia page 12 to see how to create links from your article to others, and from other articles to your own. Try to link to 3–5 articles, and link to your article from 2–3 other articles. 


Polish your work - On your own

 Continue to expand and improve your work, and format your article to match Wikipedia's tone and standards. Remember to contact your Content Expert at any time if you need further help! 


Begin moving your work to Wikipedia - On your own

 Once you've made improvements to your article based on peer review feedback, it's time to move your work to Wikipedia proper - the "mainspace." 


Editing an existing article?


  • NEVER copy and paste your draft of an article over the entire article. Instead, edit small sections at a time.
  • Copy your edits into the article. Make many small edits, saving each time, and leaving an edit summary. Never replace more than one to two sentences without saving!

Creating a new article?


Week 9

Course meetings
Monday, 13 November 2017
Assignment - Final article

It's the final week to develop your article.


  • Read Editing Wikipedia page 15 to review a final check-list before completing your assignment.
  • Don't forget that you can ask for help from your Content Expert at any time!
Milestones

Everyone should have finished all of the work they'll do on Wikipedia, and be ready for grading.

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