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Hello. I wrote an article about a related topic, [[Google Groups]]. As a new Wikipedia writer, I would appreciate any feedback on my article. Please help me by posting your feedback at the [[Wikipedia:Article Feedback Desk]]. If you wrote an article and are seeking feedback on it, please post your article at the Article Feedback Desk as well. If you could suggest better ways for me to seek feedback on my article, do leave a note at my talk page. --[[User:Hildanknight|J.L.W.S. The Special One]] 12:52, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
:The "criticism" contains [[weasel words]]. Criticism is always in danger to be POV ([[WP:NPOV]]), or even personal opinion. The article may improve from a technical feature list, like the one within this article. I do not know Google groups, but it makes a good impression (informative). [[User:Akidd dublin|Akidd dublin]]•[[User talk:Akidd dublin|tl]]•[[User:Akidd dublin/contribution|ctr-l]] 16:55, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
== Feature list ==
I wrote the feature list, Today i have put it into better style. Some data is now displayed double (twice), but i do not believe this really bugs people. Probably some people seek "float text", others (like me) seek a technical feature list. I have added the explanation about the registration process. [[User:Akidd dublin|Akidd dublin]]•[[User talk:Akidd dublin|tl]]•[[User:Akidd dublin/contribution|ctr-l]] 16:58, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
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