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My name is Adam Radomski. I am in possession of a post card book of real pictures taken during ww1 by a Robert Edward Clark. Us navy aboard the uss cassin. I believe it to be maybe mr. Clarks grandfather? If anyone can help me please contact me I am trying to contact mr. Clark for a couple years now. Thanks. [[Special:Contributions/2601:8A:4200:7D60:6CED:15F1:7954:75D7|2601:8A:4200:7D60:6CED:15F1:7954:75D7]] ([[User talk:2601:8A:4200:7D60:6CED:15F1:7954:75D7|talk]]) 19:52, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
== Adding [[WP:NPOV]] and [[WP:NOTRESUME]] markers, Dec 2024 ==
I have added the [[WP:NPOV]] and [[WP:NOTRESUME]] templates to this page since it appears to provide quite a bit of information in such a way that paints Clark in a laudatory light. A few specific examples:
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|text=During his time as the Commanding Officer, CONNECTICUT received numerous awards including back-to-back unit awards for operations of significant importance to the National Security of the United States, as well as several retention and tactical efficiency awards.
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|text=This was a unique, and temporary, assignment that allowed Clark the opportunity to serve in a senior leadership role at a major university while transitioning from active duty.
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|text=During his time as president, and despite decades of financial challenges and declining enrollment, State funding was secured which enabled the college to continue operations. Additionally, unlike many colleges across the country that have had to close because of the impacts of the COVID-19 Pandemic, Wesley College was able to maintain operations during the global COVID-19 Pandemic, which allowed the realization of a historic acquisition by Delaware State University in which Wesley College became the Wesley College of Health and Behavioral Sciences.
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The overall tone of the article is more reflective of a resume, especially considering the detailed focus on awards and "historic" accomplishments. I'm not sure about the notability of the other awards — I don't have any knowledge of navy affairs — but having "2007 Inductee into the West Chester East High School Hall of Fame" and "Numerous Unit Awards" seems more like it would be padding for a resume, not for a Wikipedia article.
Additionally, several of the citations have no actual source links, though the BLP sources tag has been on this page for over a decade now. Ultimately the aforementioned issues are in part caused by this.
I do not wish to edit the content of the article myself, especially considering there have been some issues with NPOV in the past according to above discussions, and I wouldn't know where to find credible sources for the content here. If someone with more experience than me could help bring this page up to snuff that would be great :) [[User:Triphora|Emma Lexi Triphora]] ([[User talk:Triphora|talk]]) 19:35, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
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