My main reaction to this one is “wait, what?!” The ending took me completely by surprise, so much that I had to check my app to see if it had cut out suddenly or whether that was indeed the ending. It was a daring way to end the story, IMO.

The rest of the story was all right, but I found it a bit shouty and repetitive in places, with rapid-fire dialogue that echoed what other people had literally just said. Made me feel a bit grumpy: “Weren’t you LISTENING?” I have to wonder whether this story arc might have worked better as three slightly longer parts, edited a bit differently. ( )