Jin is the last of the royal family after the King’s Lapidary has poisoned them all and his family of lapidaries that serve the royal family. Lin and Sima are the last of each their families and together they will try and defeat the invading army. The Royal family with the help of their lapidaries use the magical gems to protect the land and make it comfortable for everyone. But the stronger gems are always trying to take over and control them and that is what happened to Sima’s father. Neither of them was given a full set of lessons since it was Jin’s role to be married away from the court. Both of them working together will try and beat the general as she is taking over their lands. ( )

Lin is a young princess, never destined to rule over the kingdom. Sima, her lapidary, was never trained on how to use the powerful gems and their magic for anything beyond what a princess may need. So when a massacre of the royal family leaves Lin as the only hope for her kingdom, both find themselves running into new territory with high-stakes consequences--not just for the two of them, but for an entire people.

There is a lot to the concept and the world that Fran Wilde has created here. The traditions, the history, the people--it hearkens to an epic fantasy story, though this is delivered in a single, novella-length installment. The story is fast-moving, with little time to stop for intentional character development and backstory, with everything coming through via the characters' actions. And that can be a good thing at times, though there are moments in this story where things move so quickly that I felt a few things may have been lost. The story is well-written, and I would say my only complaint is that I would have like to see this developed over the course of more pages (or even multiple books) to really immerse myself as a reader. ( )

Lin, a member of royalty known as a "Jewel," and Sima, a "bound servant" to Lin known as "Lapidary," discover treason against the king and other political intrigue.

This book was categorized as science fiction in multiple places, which is part of the reason I picked it up. This is not even remotely sci-fi; it is 100% fantasy. (I know the line can be blurry sometimes, but that was really not the case here. This is decidedly fantasy.) That in and of itself would not be a problem; there are plenty of folks who equally like sci-fi and fantasy. I tend to prefer the former, but also have liked the latter in the past when it's done well.

The issue here is that it is not done well. As a short novella, there just really isn't enough time to do this story any justice. Instead of organic world building, it is almost entirely expositional. The characters are incredibly flat, even with there basically only being two of them for the majority of the text. The dialogue is slim and yet somehow felt repetitive.

The audiobook narrator was okay but not great. She really didn't make a vocal distinction between the characters, even with there again only really being two characters. Her general narration was a little too placid for something that was about royal intrigue and the end of an era.

Quite frankly, I was bored by this book and felt no real connection with the characters whatsoever. ( )

I know I've only read two of Fran Wilde's tales, but I'm getting the impression that I'm just not her audience at all.

I was reading this for her Hugo nomination this year and I had high hopes because some authors can really kick butt with the shorter stuff even if their longer works fall short for some readers. (Read: me).

Unfortunately, the whole concept of jewels of power is a very, very old one, and while she tries to make it fresh by doing the whole linking them to their wearers and then having the added dimension of social caste rebalancing going on... well... it was kinda dull for me. I'd rather have the jewel action be a MacGuffin or something far-off rather than this. It's hard not to compare it to some really big classics, either, and in that comparison, this will always fall short. Alas.

Maybe this is fine for a younger YA reader who's never read anything else. I don't know. I just know that it didn't really do the job for me.

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I have never been more annoyed by the words Jewel and Lapidary then I am now after reading this. I understand that they are titles but holy moly were they used a lot. At one point I got Sima and Lin confused because I couldn’t tell which father was being referred too since apparently their fathers were Jewel/Lapidary partners as well.

The world building was meh for me, we got a small glimpse into this world protected by Jewels and Lapidaries but it didn’t really explain the point of a Jewel, unless I missed it. Lapidaries could speak to gems which was really neat and I loved that part, and you could tell some research was done in regards to what gems match what emotions.

It jumped straight into the story which was a plus and in a novella is needed for their length but it still somehow fell slightly flat. A whole type of people completely wiped out expect for 2 and then bam kid from other area has he same abilities. And I feel like the story behind him was kind of an after thought, and the villain was just your typical power hungry villain with no real back story.

It was mildly paced, confusing at times, and a bit on the annoying side with the title references and rules referenced to the lapidaries to follow (which some just didn’t feel like they connected when Sima referenced them at some points)
It’s a 3.5 for me just because I like the idea behind the Lapidaries and had this been more fleshed out it could have been really great. ( )